Thursday, November 1, 2007
Questions for my Reviewer
At this point my paper is still very raw and incomplete. Alot of citations still need to be added in, and claims still need to be supported. However, I would like you to look at my main ideas and points, and let me know if they seem to be logical and whether or not I have a solid foundation for a paper. Check to see if the three viewpoints work for the prompt, and maybe suggest where I could take some of the paragraphs. I had a hard time writing last night, and got pretty stuck as you can probably already tell, so any suggestions would be welcome and accepted.
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2 comments:
You definitly have alot of good concepts in your paper, just haven't expounded on them enough. I also think that once you begin using information from you sources to cite, they will inspire some more thoughts for you.
I think the perspectives you formed are very good and that they will be easy to expand on. From now, you probably just need to add the facts and opinions from your research to the body paragraphs.
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